Diction

Trimble gives us three things that all writers need in order to improve their writing.  They are conciseness, vigorous verbs, and freshness. In my opinion, I need to improve in all three of these areas.  If I had to only pick one, it would be to improve my verb choices.  I tend to write exactly how I speak which causes me to use words that you hear in everday language.  The verbs that I choose do not contribute to the flow of my writing.  I really need to start focusing on using vigorous verbs that catch the reader's attention.  This has always been my week point.  I also tend to settle for the first draft instead of going back and adding in bigger and better verbs.  After reading what Trimble has to say, I will definitely be more aware of the verbs I choose.   I will also correct my mistakes and proofread to make my writing better.  Whenever I read a book or paper that uses vigorous verbs to get their point across, I always wish that I could write like that person.  Now I know that I can if I take the time and focus on the verbs that I choose.  My writing needs those verbs to really pull the reader in to what I have to say.  Writing will also be a lot more entertaining and enjoyable if I use these vigorous verbs.